Thank you for clicking 
Just moved from SF and felt that I finished this and yet something is eating at me about it. I am hoping that you find that it moves and can keep your attention and it has a bit of an aha in it.
But I wonder and would love to hear your thoughts on whether the drum samples are holding it back or if the song leaves anything to be desired at the end. And then I will take your lovely feedback to Gowanus and finally put a bow on it. Thank you for yer time!!
PS Also I am only experimenting with vocals here, if that is the issue then I will not be offended if you tell me 