Nice! I love how its reversed in the beginning and reverberated out to make it feel kinda dark, good idea! The use of what sounds like the RC-20 plugin (could be wrong) is great as well as it adds character to the loop and adds to the ambience of the track as a whole, especially with the vinyl crackle loop!
When the beat kicks in, I like the use of sweeps/the rising notes to differentiate it and gives it the feeling that something is coming up. As a note, the long bass note that starts playing is quite loud and muds up the mix a bit, I would try to clean that up or lower it in volume a bit to allow the rest of the track to really come through. The drum sequence is nice, lots of little hats and percussive elements to add the feeling of movement throughout the section. Your kick seems like it has reverb on it in this section which is a bold move (although I could be wrong), this could be muddying up the mix, so if you are going to put reverb on it, you might want to tame it a little so its not bogging other elements down.
The pad sounds are nice and help to keep the atmosphere, I also like what sounds like a reversed string/melodic element in the background, it helps to keep the track consistent with how it started out.
Moving on to the breakdown, the use of a plucky sounds is nice and refreshing, keeping things moving and progressing. However, the bass sound/note you play as a build up (around 2:05 to 2:10) is a little loud/resonant so I would work on smoothening it out so it doesn’t overpower everything else.
Overall a nice entry, its very unique and I feel once a few bits are cleaned up it will be a strong contender, its also nice to see you have used a lot of the samples and implemented them well. These are just my opinions, but I hope it helps, best of luck!